in momentum space
magnetic monopole's mass
furtive fingerprints
haitech haiku
©2003 judith meskill
It is a rule of the composition of haiku that a "season" word is included - even in hightech ones :)
Cheers
Posted by: miglia at October 3, 2003 11:06 AMin modern haiku a kigo is not demanded as is the 5-7-5 form not required... i choose to abide by 5-7-5 and, at times forego the seasonal reference... that being said, here is a revision with a sanctioned season word:
in momentum space
magnetic monopole's mass
firefly fingerprints
and a season word modification to the one i wrote in response to your powerpoint ponderings:
powerpoint presents
sunny slogan solutions
looknfeel folly
cheers... (^:
Posted by: judith at October 3, 2003 02:25 PMsalam